Movies and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have a negative effect on society and should be censored. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The noun phrase possibility seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase teenager seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that teenager may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
The spelling of center is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
The spelling of behavior is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
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Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?