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Movies and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have a negative effect on society and should be censored. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays there is a strong belief that
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games
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 have a huge steady rise through the community which may include vicious content. A number of
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 assume
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 may cause various minuses through society and it needs to be abolished. Other
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 feel the
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 are created only for giving
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 to
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 for enjoying a leisure time.
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 and foremost, there are several segments of
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such
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a teenager
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 who may have
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 tendency to be tempted for playing the game mostly.
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,
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games
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 may not mention the exact age of the
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 and because of it making damage to players. To illustrate
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, in my school years, numerous clubs were opened near the musical educational
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. After the classes, one of my classmates went to the club and wasted money gaining a purchase of two hours duration.
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, he fell into game addiction and gained the
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 of an aggressor. On a positive note,
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games
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 may have numerous contents and not only include sinister characteristics, assassination or other frightening symbols. After a busy working day,
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 may feel they want to spend their time watching light comedies or playing a variety of
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.
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, one year ago when I was fully concentrated on doing television programs, before that I had done the research for three months and comprehended that my brain needs some relax and I have to spend my time doing something easy and joyful.
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, I understood that
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 card
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 help me to calm my mind and fix my concentration. To conclude, in the 21st century lots of media platforms, including movies and device
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, contain violent content for society. Many
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 believe it will create/cause psychological injuries for lots of
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, while others suppose
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games
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 may be considered a way of balancing method.

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