Many major cities today are becoming bigger and more crowded. Why is this happening? What measures can be taken to solve this problem?

Nowadays, one of the major problems is

an

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the

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expansion of the

cities

and their increased

population

.

This

essay will describe the various reasons which are responsible for

this

and what kind of measures could be taken to resolve

this

problem. In recent years,there has been a dramatic increase in the

population

of the urban areas,

thus

leading to its expansion.One of the major reasons behind it is unemployment in the rural areas which

persuades

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people to move to big

cities

in search of work.Other than

this

, birth rates are increasing annually contributing to

rising

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the rising

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population

.

For instance

, a study was done by National Health Survey in India there has been a peak in childbirth in the

last

two years.

Thus

, the

Goverment

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of India has started a birth control programme which motivates and educates the people regarding family planning. So, necessary measures should be taken to sort out these kinds of problems.

Nevertheless

, the welfare of a nation depends upon the cumulative efforts of both the government as well as its citizens. So, pertaining to

this

government should take necessary steps

such

as the construction of industries, power plants and many more in the villages, so that local inhabitants can get jobs in their respective places.

Therefore

, they can earn money

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their native places and no need to move to big

cities

.Other than

this

individuals should be educated about the consequences of the

population

crisis. So, in

this

, way they can

also

contribute to the welfare of the nation. To conclude, undoubtedly, the extension of the

cities

and the growing crowd is a major issue which cannot be neglected. So, both the citizens and governing bodies should take the necessary steps to overcome

this

problem for the growth and welfare of their countries.