The government should pay to the parents of very young children, so that one of them can stay at home and look after their children. What do you think are the pros and cons of this policy? Justify your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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very young children’s
parents
should be paid
by
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the
government
.
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, one of
parents
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the parents

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can stay with their children to take care of them.
This
essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of
such
a measure. On the one hand, there are definite advantages to giving
money
to
parents
of young children in order to persuade them to stay with their child.
Firstly
, by doing so their kids are likely to acquire a stable upbringing. In fact, most
of
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studies
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show that the
parents
have an active role in their children’s
life
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so that the appearance of them
beside
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their kids can significantly have positive effects on their personality.
Secondly
,
this
measure can mentally put the
parents
in a good condition. If both
an
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young child’s
parents
are at work,
this
may cause stress in them and make them occupied.
Therefore
, it not only would
adversly
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adversely

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affect their mental health but
also
extremely decrease their efficiency
on
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in

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their career.
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, paying
to
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parents
from
government
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the government

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can economically cause
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a problem
the problem

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problem
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problems

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. In other
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worlds
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, due to
government
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the government

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have
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to allocate a great deal of
money
for all
of
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parents
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of young kids, it is not able to address other issues of the country. By way of example, the problem of lacking enough educational and health
centers
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centres

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would not be solved if
government
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the government

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allocates
budget
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to
sizeable
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number of
parents
of young children. On top of that,
this
can dramatically decrease the
parents
’ productivity. Indeed,
pay
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paying

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money
to
parents
seems to
incourage
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encourage

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them to quit their occupation and just stay at home.
Thus
they can not find
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an opportunity
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opportunity
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opportunities

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to flourish their talents and make the most of their potential. In conclusion,
therefore
, the policy of giving
money
to young children’s
parents
in order to one of them can stay at home to look after their child clearly has benefits and detriments,
such
as increasing the quality of child’s upbringing and
also
boost
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their
parents
’ mental health as pros and declining the ability of
government
to solve other economical issues of the country accompanied by discouraging
parents
to be active and productive as its cons.
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