The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
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The bar charts give information on what UK graduates and postgraduates did after college in 2008, excluding those who went into full-time
work
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, for all four types, the amount of graduate students is approximately ten times that of postgraduate students. It can be inferred from both charts that most chose to participate in
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study,
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voluntary
work
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is the least popular choice. For both graduates and postgraduates, the number of unemployed people is about half the number of people who went into
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study.
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,
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the amount of graduates who chose part-time
work
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is only a bit higher than the unemployed, the amount of postgraduates doing part-time
work
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is actually almost equal to those enrolled in
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study.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Graduate
  • Postgraduate
  • Full-time work
  • Further education
  • Part-time work
  • Unemployment
  • Volunteering
  • Traveling
  • Gap year
  • Career progression
  • Job market
  • Transition
  • Academic life
  • Professional sphere
  • Economic factors
  • Social factors
  • Financial crisis
  • Long-term impact
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