Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extend do you agree?
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that transports may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It appears that you are missing a comma or two with the interrupter for instance. Consider adding the comma(s).
The spelling of traveling is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
- Summary
- Restatement of thesis
- Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
- In conclusion
- To conclude
- To summarize
- Finally
- In a nutshell
- In general