Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patient do not follow an exercise routine. what do you think why this happens? how people can be encouraged to exercise regularly?
It seems that the use of particle to may be incorrect here.
It seems that exercises may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
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It appears that age associated is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
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It seems that doctor's may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
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