Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patient do not follow an exercise routine. what do you think why this happens? how people can be encouraged to exercise regularly?
It is often advised by the clinicians to the elderly
people
to
perform Fix the infinitive
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exercises
on a routine basis but the majority of them fail to do so.This
essay will discuss various reasons responsible for this
and how people
can be motivated to work out daily.
Undoubtedly, exercise plays a pivotal role in maintaining a healthy lifestyle for every age
group. Although
, older people
are more encouraged by the doctors for doing exercises
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exercise
,
because most Remove the comma
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of
the ailments Change preposition
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such
as diabetes, high cholesterol and cardiac problems are age- associated
. Add a hyphen
age-associated
However
, many of them are unable to exercise regularly. This
could be due to many reasons such
as poor dexterity, joint and muscle pain and arthritis. Therefore
, apparently
they feel more fatigue as compared to the younger generation. Add a comma
,apparently
In addition
to this
ageing results in behaviour changes. For instance
, many studies have proved that old age
individuals are more stubborn as compared to middle or younger age
group. Hence
, they do not like to follow the recommendations, even if it is prescribed by the doctors for their own good.
However
, many measures can be taken by the governing bodies as well as the communities to inspire ageing people
to perform exercises
. Firstly
, the government should consider building more public parks, walking pathways as well as sports centres for the senior citizens. Secondly
, family and friends should also
persuade elderly people
to perform exercises
by making them aware of its health benefits. For instance
, in India mainly in the urban areas, in the living, societies people
have started laughter clubs where not only the old age
people
cherish but also
exercise on a routine basis.Therefore
, both the government and people
should make efforts to teach aged individuals the value of working out.
In the conclusion, although
pertaining to old age
and many health-related problems, individuals fail to follow doctor's
recommendations on routine Fix the agreement mistake
doctors'
exercises
. But with combined efforts of the government and people
as well as medical professionals this
problem can be resolved and the elderly can be guided to do exercises
to maintain a healthy life.Submitted by drvishal13 on
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