Online courses have been welcomed as a great opportunity by many students, other students see these courses as a poor substitute for classroom teaching. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course?

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for students that widen the scope of learning through online courses, but several students saw

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as a negative replacement for face-to-face learning. In my opinion, there are some advantages of

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method, mainly is the huge possibility of

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management for working students, meanwhile, for

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it can be social skills are lessen. The most significant advantage of online classes is that a

student

can manage his

time

.

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means to say that the pupil can choose the school's website which schedule he can work on.

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, if the

student

is currently working, and he wants to study, he could have a tremendous chance to make it possible because most of the online

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are designed

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working

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.

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job makes it challenging on learning English which I need for

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course is so effective for me because I can stretch my

time

for my job and school.

On the other hand

, there are

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several disadvantages of online classes. One is the limitation of social skills,

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as team building, friendship

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classmates, and face-to-face conversation. Due to limited interaction,

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could lead to

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introvert person where

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conversations

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such

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of feelings.

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felt if they study in a small room without physical

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and

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can lead to introversion. In conclusion,

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online schooling for

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the

student

has the

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privilege

of

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management, and for disadvantage is

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potential introversion of

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.