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In the future, all vehicles will be driverless and the only people travelling inside those cars would be passengers.

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With the development of modern technology, the role of the
drivers
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 in all vehicles will dramatically decrease or even disappear in several decades. From my perspective, the benefits we can gain from
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 trend will definitely over the cost of
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 tendency. The tendency of vehicle driverless will bring numerous conveniences to our lives.
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, most owners of private
cars
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 have to drive their
cars
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 to go to work by themselves, which results in too much time being wasted on the road,
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, if their
cars
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 can function automatically,
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 period will be saved and people’s working efficiency will increase rapidly.
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, since the automatic
cars
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 which are driven by the system of artificial intelligence are more reliable than human-kind
drivers
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, the trend of vehicle driverless is often predicted can contribute to reducing the rate of traffic accidents.
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, just like several times industrial transformations which happened in the previous times, the advent of automatic vehicles will
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 generate certain costs in some aspects.
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, there is no doubt that a large number of
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 will lose their jobs and the wave of unemployment may
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 expand to other companies related to
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,
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, plenty of professional driver training enterprises are predicted to disappear. Generally speaking, even if many problems may be brought about by the trend of vehicle driverless, I still believe that
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 tendency will be a good thing for our society, because according to the history since the industrial revolution, the progress of technology is inevitable and will definitely improve everyone’s living standards in a long term.

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