Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

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has been redeemed as the pathway to success.
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has provided us with various opportunities,
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improveing
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improving
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quality
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the quality
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of each individual as well. I'm convinced that the
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should provide subsidy
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and provide affordable regardless of wealth or social status. Not only
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method have created equality among its
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, but it
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improves
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quality
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the quality
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of the
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as well.
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, we have known that in order to practice in a high paying carrier, each individual needs to have
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level of
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,
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, cause a massive amount of fortunes.
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example
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law and
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degrees in many countries
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requires each individual to complete
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two-stage
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of
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(secondary and graduate programs).
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process
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just cost
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deal of time but
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wealth as well.
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, eliminate any
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earner from
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the competition
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.
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, governments can prevent
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by making
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free and accessible to everyone.
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is why providing free and affordable
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help lower inequality in
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society.
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,
many
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informations
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have shown us ,that most
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the
development
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countries
contains
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high numbers of
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population
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.
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,
educated
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an educated
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population
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will provide necessary skill
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for
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uses
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.
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, an
education
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population
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guarantees a decrease in unemployment,
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improving the
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of the
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in the country.
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the
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should provide free
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to as much of the
population
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as possible. In conclusion, free
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helps each
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improve
quality
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and equality in its
population
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.
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,having free
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was
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important task the
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should provide for
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population
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. The
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should
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by providing financial support for
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earners or
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the
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fees.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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