you live in a room in college. there is a problem in the bathroom that you would like it to be repaired. write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. in the letter describe the problem explain how the situation affects you suggest a time when repairman could visit

Dear Sir I am writing
this
letter to get your attention on my problem which is regarding the bathroom in my room. My name is Roop and I am a
first
-year student
live
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in the college room. Everything is going very smoothly but ,
unfortunately
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something happens wrong with my bathroom. Actually when I got up in the early morning and went to the lavatory for taking bath,
then
I saw water split on the floor everywhere. When I tried to check it out I found a crack in the bottom of the bathtub. It is unavoidable problem because it may occur serious injury because of a wet floor. ,
Furthermore
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if it takes longer to fix it, maybe bed bugs will appear everywhere in the bathroom because of water. I hope you will understand my situation and ask somebody to repair it as soon as possible. As I mentioned before I am a student and I have a busy schedule every week, but tomorrow I am available from 1 p.m to 3p.m in between repairman could visit and fix the washroom tub. I know you
also
have a busy schedule but it is a very serious matter for everyone's safety. I look forward to hearing from you.
Your
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sincerly
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sincerely
Roop
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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