Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any revelant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, The world population growing, and Governments are a significant role
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the country. Some
people
believe that the authorities should
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money on tracks more than
streets
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on streets
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. I
pesonally
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personally
agree with
this
statement.
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Firstly
, It can be considered that
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governments spend money
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the maintenance
roads
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,
which
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railways
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second
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for a long period of time which are not vulnerable while tracks are more essential for urban areas,
people
there tend to use
railways
more.
For instance
, office workers use
railways
more than driving a car because
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faster and citizens do not have to face traffic.
Additionally
, tracks can avoid the pollution from streets, it's saving the world.
Secondly
,
railways
offer a safer commuting experience both for the citizens and traders. The numbers of road accidents and highway casualties in many countries,
for example
, are far higher than that of railway accidents. That's why
people
tend to use safer
transportation
, which is a much more prudent idea.
Moreover
,
railways
could carry hundreds of
people
and several hundred tonnes of goods at a time while road transports not built for that.
Finally
, the population of the world is increasing rapidly, and
that is
why investing more money in a faster and more reliable
transportation
system is more logical than investing in the older
transportation
system. In conclusion, I believe that a government, either in a developed or a developing country, should invest to build a safer, faster and more reliable
transportation
system, and the railway, for
this
reason, should get an obvious priority.
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