Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any revelant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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the country. Some

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believe that the authorities should

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money on tracks more than

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on streets

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agree with

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governments spend money

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the maintenance

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railways

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place. Streets

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for a long period of time which are not vulnerable while tracks are more essential for urban areas,

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there tend to use

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more.

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, office workers use

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more than driving a car because

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faster and citizens do not have to face traffic.

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, tracks can avoid the pollution from streets, it's saving the world.

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,

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offer a safer commuting experience both for the citizens and traders. The numbers of road accidents and highway casualties in many countries,

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, are far higher than that of railway accidents. That's why

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tend to use safer

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, which is a much more prudent idea.

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,

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could carry hundreds of

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and several hundred tonnes of goods at a time while road transports not built for that.

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, the population of the world is increasing rapidly, and

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why investing more money in a faster and more reliable

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system is more logical than investing in the older

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system. In conclusion, I believe that a government, either in a developed or a developing country, should invest to build a safer, faster and more reliable

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system, and the railway, for

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reason, should get an obvious priority.