Some people think that it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

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it’s better to have a
friend
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diverse.And I intend to give a brief outline of
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arguments .
First
of all, those individuals choosing a
friend
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opinion gives the
first
reason that they don’t want conflicts.To explain that, these people follow the same values and their ideas and principles for the life might be familiar, which
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their bond and will lead to
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and their relationships will become stronger.
For instance
, it’s a scientific fact that a person with similar habits is more likely to become friends.
Moreover
,it will not only reflect the never-ending relationship in the future, but they
also
will never fight because they have the same habits.
Besides
that, the other section of the
society
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beliefs
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that it will be
blessing
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a blessing
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for a human if they make a
friend
who sometimes
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disagreement
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a disagreement
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with them.
Thus
, having
such
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friend
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will enhance their knowledge
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solving problems and conflicts. As a matter of fact, a
friend
having a diverse way of solving problems
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will make it by his own method.
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, when you solve some mathematics tasks
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and
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a formula, you taught in the book it takes only 5 minutes,
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there are some individuals that will solve using sophisticated formulas or even their own method in 20 minutes. In conclusion, after looking into both the points. I completely agree that it’s more advantageous if a person
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a
friend
with a different opinion because it will wider their knowledge which will lead to their future growth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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