Many governments think that economic progress is their important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, most parts of the world are striving
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development. A few
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that economic growth is vital for
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and some
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that other aspects like literacy rate and health sector's development
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important. The analysis contained within the following paragraphs will explore both the views and support along with economic growth, other aspects should
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be considered.
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with, a few thinks that economic growth is required because it raises the standard of the country.
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for a country to develop infrastructure or to increase
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or
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for transportation, authorities should be financially good.
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, money is required
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to develop rural areas and establish good infrastructure for people living over there. Apart from that,
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should
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focus on other aspects like education and
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care sector as it raises the standard of people.
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rate is increased it will
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inturn
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increase the economy.
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