A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, materialism is taking the place of the old pillars which held up
society
. In fact, a study performed on a global level
last
year stated that, for the majority of people, the social position of a person is more important than his social behaviour. I strongly believe that the reason for
this
rising trend is the increase of possibilities to show ourselves in a virtual readjusted world. In
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I will outline why I think that
this
superficial point of view is increasing in our
society
and
then
I will analyse a possible solution for
this
problem. Undoubtedly, one of the main causes of the loss of fundamental values is the spread of social
networks
. Indeed, social
networks
,
such
as Instagram or Facebook, base their existence on the external appearance.
Furthermore
, with the current technological instruments, it is possible to modify our look.
This
allows us to show a different version of ourselves and brings people to concentrate even more on their external look. So, despite social
networks
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many positive aspects, they surely induce people to concentrate more on their aspects than on their values.
However
, I think it is still possible to find an escape route to
this
trend. Indeed our
society
should be educated
to
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the so diffused fake culture on social
networks
. So, a possible way to resolve
this
problem could be to inform the young generation about the risk that the internet could represent for the actual
society
.
Therefore
, they will know that what they see in the virtual world is not an important aspect of our life. In conclusion, the diffusion of a very dangerous culture, based on superficiality and social status, is a problem that our
society
should seriously face. Anyway, it's not impossible to avoid
this
risk. Indeed, an effective way is to educate young to beware of those wrong behaviours, whereas they should concentrate on what really counts: the fundamental values
such
as honour, kindness and trust.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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