Many people believe that studying at university is the best way to develop oneself, learn new skills and find a well-paid job. Other people believe that more is learned from getting a job straight away after school and learning whilst working.
Education
in university
was considered the best path to improve, learn new tasks and find better career
opportunities by many people. While some argue that learning from work
straight away after school is better. From my personal view, a
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university
education
gives admission more specific knowledge than school and is imperative for better career
paths.
University
is a place for higher learning, to study more specific and technical skills
which will lead to better career
opportunities in the future. At university
, admissions do not study fundamental subjects like at a school. On the other hand
, they are exposed to more in-depth knowledge, for instance
, engineering, architecture, medical, psychology, economics and finance. These majors will pave students’ career
paths as a professional in their fields. Furthermore
, university
students experience other extra activities with others while learning to build and maintain relationships with other people, both inside and outside of their university
.
Nevertheless
, working life is totally different from the classroom. Many newly graduated students struggle with their first
job since they have to learn everything new for each specific task, for example
, leadership skills
, negotiating skills
, communication skills
and problem-solving skills
. Some people believe that university
is not necessary, learning through work
is a better way of learning. I partly agree with this
statement because skills
learned from work
are unlimited, however
, I still believe that education
at university
has broadened my knowledge and prepared me with basic skills
. From my own experience, the architecture and design course at university
prepared me to become an architect.
In conclusion, I partly agree that learning at work
is better than in classrooms. However
, I still believe that a university
education
is an important path to prepare students for better careers.Submitted by pearl12346 on
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