Some educationalists argue that non-exam , arts-based subjects , such as music , drama, art and craft , should be compulsory in the secondary –school curriculum. They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance . to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Art

has ever been one of the most important

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in the world; since the

first

years of the born of humans,

art

has been

an

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universal

mean

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of communication; and during the centuries it has grown and

it

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has been expressed in a large variety of forms. For

this

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reasons

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students

can

studied

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art

-based subjects at school.

First

of all, I believe that for a teenager studying

art

can be had a lot of advantages.

For example

, a drama classroom can teach

to

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the

students

how to work in a team. Because

of

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students

must collaborate

one

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to

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each other with the aim of producing a successful final show. The same is true of musicians who play in an orchestra. They

also

have to work together to produce the best sound. As well

as

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this

,

art

subjects give

to

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the people the possibility to express

itself

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and to enlarge the walls of our minds; that I think

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is an important advantage because can help everyone to improve their self-confidence.

On the other hand

, we can say that not everyone

are

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able to

acting

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or

playing

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an instrument or

painting

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.

Secondly

, to learn music, theatrical plays or all the techniques of

craft

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the craft

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must

required

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a lot of time

of

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studying, but

also

to buy all the equipment necessary can be very expensive.

Consequently

, in

this

case

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art

subjects can be considered a kind of exclusion for any

students

. For me

study

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different types of

art

at school, has allowed me to improve my creativity,

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it

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is essential for my job, but

also

,as I said, I learn the ability to work whit different types of people and participate successfully in a group project. To sum up, I agree with the idea that

art

must be studied in school, but maybe it should not be compulsory; and I think that

students

should be able to choose their own kind of

art

that

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is

more easy

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to

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them or that

represent

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themselves.