Some people believe that the most important aspect of their job is their salary. Others think that the job itself is the most important. What do you think is the most important aspect of a job? Include specific details and examples to support your choice

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for supporting us financially,

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making many

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agree that the salary is the most important

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when came to

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consideration.

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, I disagree with

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idea. I believe that there were more important

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when came to

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decision

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as

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job

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security and

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jobs

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satisfaction.

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this

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passage will show the importance of

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aspect

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.

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, we require to evaluate the

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of

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security as well when we decide

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a

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a job

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jobs

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.

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job

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guarantee our long term association with the employer or has the compensation for

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when

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need to terminate their contracts.

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,

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action will decrease the risk of

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losing their

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and income.

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making it one of the most important

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when came to determining

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jobs

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.

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, I am convinced that every individual will perform well when they

appreciates

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their

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.

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instance

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do we

admires

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this

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and have

passionate

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working

it

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for it

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, and

do

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this

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workplace

created

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a healthy environment for its

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This

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factors

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if

meet

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met

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will make us more committed to the

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increased

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our work's productivity and quality exponentially.

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make the

aspect

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of

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jobs

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satisfaction can't be overlooked. In conclusion, as we have seen that both

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security and

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satisfaction

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apply

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if

take

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taken

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into consideration will benefit the

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both financially and mentally in the long term.

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addition

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making these

to

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apply

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aspect

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become more significant that

jobs

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salary. At

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last

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when we applied we have to take all of the

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aspect

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in to

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consideration and make a decision with caution.