Some people believe that the most important aspect of their job is their salary. Others think that the job itself is the most important. What do you think is the most important aspect of a job? Include specific details and examples to support your choice

Almost everyone has a

job

. We required a

job

for supporting us financially,

hence

making many

to

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agree that the salary is the most important

aspect

when came to

job

consideration.

However

, I disagree with

this

idea. I believe that there were more important

factors

when came to

jobs

decision

such

as

,

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job

security and

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jobs

satisfaction.

Therefore

this

passage will show the importance of

this

aspect

.

Firstly

, we require to evaluate the

factors

of

job

security as well when we decide

for

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a

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a job

jobs

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jobs

.

For example

, do

this

job

guarantee our long term association with the employer or has the compensation for

employees

when

it

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they

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need to terminate their contracts.

As a result

,

this

action will decrease the risk of

employees

losing their

jobs

and income.

Thus

making it one of the most important

factors

when came to determining

a

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jobs

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jobs

.

Secondly

, I am convinced that every individual will perform well when they

appreciates

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their

jobs

.

For

instance

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do we

admires

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admire

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this

job

and have

passionate

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passion

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working

it

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for it

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, and

do

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does

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this

workplace

created

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create

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a healthy environment for its

employees

?

This

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factors

if

meet

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met

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will make us more committed to the

jobs

thus

increased

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our work's productivity and quality exponentially.

Therefor

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make the

aspect

of

jobs

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job

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satisfaction can't be overlooked. In conclusion, as we have seen that both

job

security and

job

satisfaction

,

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if

take

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taken

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into consideration will benefit the

employees

both financially and mentally in the long term.

In

addition

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making these

to

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aspect

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aspects

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become more significant that

jobs

salary. At

last

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when we applied we have to take all of the

aspect

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aspects

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in to

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into

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consideration and make a decision with caution.