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''It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?’'

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It is argued that
as
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 an early
age
punishment
 is essential for
children
 to know the difference between right and wrong. In my opinion, I agree with the statement mentioned above because
punishment
 can assist the
children
 to value
his
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their
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action
, and
similarly
, parents and teachers ought to give knowledge
in
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 good behaviour with some simple
action
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actions
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.
Punishment
 is one of the most significant
action
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actions
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 that can be done for
children
 to give them
awareness
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an awareness
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 of their doings
especially
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 at a young
age
.
This
 is to say that a potential warning and provide enlightenment to kids that he did wrong and it can
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 immediately because of their fresh mind.
For instance
, I remembered during
my
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 early
age
, as an Asian kid, my father used to call my attention
for
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to
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 the things that I have done. His normal
action
 if I did wrong was to hit me. I knew that back
then
 that he just want me to learn which one is best for me and until now I still remember those to not act that
action
 again.
Furthermore
, parents and teachers might as well
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children
 a simple
punishment
 so that to have them realise the negative outcome of their
action
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actions
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.
For example
, if the
children
is
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are
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 not doing their homework and they are only watching television, for
this
senario
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scenario
 usually the parents will turn off the television and told them that they cannot watch until they finished their homework.
In addition
 for teachers,
simple
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the simple
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action
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actions
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 of
punishment
 can be done
such
 as additional
project
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projects
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, surprise
examination
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examinations
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, and oral
recitation
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recitations
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. In conclusion,
This
 essay supports that
punishment
 should be provided at
early
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an early
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age
 because the
children
 can learn immediately the value of their
action
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actions
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 and similar to guardians that they can provide simple
punishment
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • punishment
  • positive reinforcement
  • consequences
  • time-outs
  • removal of privileges
  • open communication
  • clear expectations
  • consistency
  • fairness
  • disciplinary action
  • proportionate
  • moral values
  • internalization
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