''It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?’'

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an early

age

punishment

is essential for

children

to know the difference between right and wrong. In my opinion, I agree with the statement mentioned above because

punishment

can assist the

children

to value

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action

, and

similarly

, parents and teachers ought to give knowledge

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good behaviour with some simple

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.

Punishment

is one of the most significant

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that can be done for

children

to give them

awareness

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of their doings

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at a young

age

.

This

is to say that a potential warning and provide enlightenment to kids that he did wrong and it can

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immediately because of their fresh mind.

For instance

, I remembered during

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early

age

, as an Asian kid, my father used to call my attention

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the things that I have done. His normal

action

if I did wrong was to hit me. I knew that back

then

that he just want me to learn which one is best for me and until now I still remember those to not act that

action

again.

Furthermore

, parents and teachers might as well

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children

a simple

punishment

so that to have them realise the negative outcome of their

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actions

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.

For example

, if the

children

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not doing their homework and they are only watching television, for

this

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scenario

usually the parents will turn off the television and told them that they cannot watch until they finished their homework.

In addition

for teachers,

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the simple

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action

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actions

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of

punishment

can be done

such

as additional

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projects

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, surprise

examination

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examinations

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, and oral

recitation

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. In conclusion,

This

essay supports that

punishment

should be provided at

early

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an early

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age

because the

children

can learn immediately the value of their

action

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actions

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and similar to guardians that they can provide simple

punishment

.