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At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.

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Nowadays, in some regions, the majority of the residents are youngsters while elderlies are in the minority.
Although
 there would be some drawbacks to
this
 situation, I believe that its benefits are much more as I will discuss. Regarding the negative points, many
people
 believe that insight our elderlies have into every situation is vital to light up our future.
That is
 because they have lived longer than others and encountered many hardships throughout their lives
than
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that
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 younger
people
 would have no idea about. To illustrate
this
 vividly, their experience of difficulties would be helpful to give their loved ones a vision to find a practical solution to their problems and prevent the repetition of mistakes. Since their assistance would be beneficial, their absence will have a negative effect on society and
people
's lives as well. Considering the plus points, the younger population is the more productive it will be. As a matter of fact,
although
 older
people
 are more experienced, they cannot supply the
work
 power. Since youngsters are in a better physical situation constitute the power essential to put the gears of the society together. The younger population is the more productive it would be, while with the older
people
 in the majority who are not able to
work
 properly, younger
people
 have to
work
 more providing necessary products. As most of the burden would be on the minority of the population would be detrimental to society, more young adults would be much more beneficial. In conclusion,
although
 the presence of older
people
 is important as they are more experienced, as youngsters provide the
work
 power it is much more advantageous for a country for younger
people
 to be in majority.
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