Some people believe that to give opportunities to the new generation companies should encourage high-level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree?

It is generally believed by certain individuals that over 55 high-class-old

workers

should be retired in order to provide chances to young generations by

companies

. Regarding

this

, I strongly disagree with

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as the

retirement

of experienced

workers

is detrimental

for

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the company.

Firstly

, while I accept that some argue that the unemployment of young adults is an urgent issue in contemporary society, I would point out that the

retirement

of senior employees is not a solution

of

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this

issue.

Although

seasoned

workers

retire, new

workers

cannot replace them since the working types are different depending on the position. While

skillful

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old

workers

manage and supervise as they are familiar with day-to-day operations, new

workers

cannot handle these positions.

Therefore

, the

retirement

of senior

workers

is not an efficient means of hiring more young

workers

.

Moreover

, if seasoned employees retire earlier, it discourages the

revenue

of

companies

. Since new

workers

cannot work independently, they should be monitored and supervised by senior

workers

.

Therefore

, an absence of

skillful

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workforces

mean

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a lack of organized work, thereby leading to decreasing productivity and

revenue

.

For example

, a recent media in Korea reports that

companies

that have

skillful

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senior

workers

earn approximately 20% higher outcomes than others. As the example clearly illustrates, seasoned senior

workers

are indispensable for the high

revenue

of

companies

.

Finally

, some claim that senior

workers

are

wall-paid

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, so it is cheaper to provide salaries for new

workers

.

However

, it is not always true. While

skillful

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workforces have worked at the company

more

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than 3 decades, new ones do not have enough skills to deal with work.

Therefore

,

companies

should provide a lot of training courses to enhance the abilities of new

staffs

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.

As a result

, it costs more money to

training

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new

workers

rather than remaining old

staffs

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. In conclusion, while I accept that young generations need job opportunities, the

retirement

of senior

workers

are

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not a key as their positions are different.

Additionally

, if seasoned

workers

retire earlier, it contributes to decreasing

revenue

and increasing money for training new employees.

Consequently

, it is rather disadvantageous for the company.