Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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In general, the average
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to complete the education from lower grade to a degree takes around twenty plus years. Some individuals argue that in
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span current education systems must include a more practical syllabus to teach real-
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scenarios to the children. It is agreed that schools and colleges must include practical
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in the curriculum. Practical execution for every theory they teach allows
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, and the real-
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and energy for employers.
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with, most of the learning
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not provide an opportunity for
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investigation and research.
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, it is very difficult to gain deeper knowledge on
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, I pursued my
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in electronics and communications, my faculty was thought
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, I was not able
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the functionality of a circuit board due to a lack of practical sessions.
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, I was not able to score higher on
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it is equally important to provide
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training
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, All the companies in every sector looking for
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fresh college graduates. Unfortunately, these companies end up
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spending
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of money
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training these interns.
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, The "TATA Consultancy services" organization established
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own training
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across the globe to train
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new hires from colleges.
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, every year, they spend more than ten
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of their income to incorporate
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for fresh college graduates,
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company and they trained me for six months.
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, practical
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not only important for individual
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but
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a need for employers. To conclude, though, on an average people spend twenty-five
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of their life in schooling it is not helping to resolve today's world problems and
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students' does not become experts on any
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dual learning systems
  • theoretical knowledge
  • practical application
  • project-based learning
  • real-world scenarios
  • retention
  • soft skills
  • communication
  • teamwork
  • problem-solving
  • curriculum
  • fact memorization
  • integrate technology
  • coding
  • digital literacy
  • assessment methods
  • portfolios
  • practical demonstrations
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