Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?
In general, the average
time
to complete the education from lower grade to a degree takes around twenty plus years. Some individuals argue that in this
time
span current education systems must include a more practical syllabus to teach real-time
scenarios to the children. It is agreed that schools and colleges must include practical skills
in the curriculum. Practical execution for every theory they teach allows students'
to gain Correct your spelling
students
deeper
understanding of Add an article
a deeper
subject
, and the real-Add an article
the subject
a subject
time
experimental knowledge saves time
and energy for employers.
To begin
with, most of the learning centers
across the globe Change the spelling
centres
does
not provide an opportunity for Correct subject-verb agreement
do
thier
students to spend Correct your spelling
their
the
time
on real world
investigation and research. Add a hyphen
real-world
Therefore
, it is very difficult to gain deeper knowledge on subject
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the subject
For instance
, I pursued my bachelors
in electronics and communications, my faculty was thought Change noun form
bachelor's
circut
board manufacturing in a Correct your spelling
circuit
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classroom
class room
, Correct your spelling
classroom
On the contrary
, I was not able grasp
the functionality of a circuit board due to a lack of practical sessions. Add the particle
to grasp
As a result
, I was not able to score higher on this
subject
. So, to
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for
expertise
it is equally important to provide Add a comma
,expertise
trainging
on both theory and practical Correct your spelling
training
skills
.
On the other hand
, All the companies in every sector looking for a practical knowledge
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practical knowledge
a piece of practical knowledge
in
fresh college graduates. Unfortunately, these companies end up Change preposition
from
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spending Change preposition
apply
lot
of money Correct article usage
a lot
in
training these interns. Change preposition
on
For instance
, The "TATA Consultancy services" organization established it's
own training Correct your spelling
its
centers
across the globe to train Change the spelling
centres
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new hires from colleges. Replace the word
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Furthermore
, every year, they spend more than ten percent
of their income to incorporate Change the spelling
per cent
trainings
for fresh college graduates, Change the wording
training
pieces of training
this
is my first
company and they trained me for six months. Therefore
, practical skills
is
not only important for individual Change the verb form
are
skills
but also
a need for employers.
To conclude, though, on an average people spend twenty-five percent
of their life in schooling it is not helping to resolve today's world problems and Change the spelling
per cent
also
students' does not become experts on any subject
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