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The older generations tend to have very traditional idea about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

#generations #idea #people #life
No doubt our past ways of lavishness were better
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 to modern. Some
people
 argue that there are not
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 effective to prepare the
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children for their life. I believe that they had some
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 that can enhance in modern
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. In the past, our tradition consists of both pros and cons. Our elders know very well how to respect others, How to behave with others. They used to wear traditional clothes to show their culture and
traditions
. In ancient times pupils were very obedient to their teachers.
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 things
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 properly organized, and they used to live in
neat
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 and clean environment.
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olders
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holders
 had a deep
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 in the freedom of the nation. The societies were extremely friendly and helpful to each other. Eventually, our past tradition was very successful in every development of our country. In the modern era,
people
 have distinct opinions. Youngsters want to make their own choices. They consider old
traditions
 are useless and boring so they likely to avoid them.
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 there was a partition between men and women
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 days women don't
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right
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 to vote. Nowadays
people
 do everything according to requirements
such
 as education, marry, selection of profession many other of sort decision.
Although
 some
traditions
 are still
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 many false have been demolished. To conclude to some extent our
traditions
 are correct but not at all. There was
streao
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stream
 typical thinking of
people
 towards specific gender or religion which has changed now. I think today we should teach youngsters in
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 world regardless of traditional ways.
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