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In the future, no body buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statment?

#future #body #newspapers #books #statment
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 modern
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 the use of printed
newspapers
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 vs online reading is a topic for debate. The new technological revolution and growing popularity of the internet have brought many changes in our lives in the
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 few decades. Nowadays there are several free reading apps on the internet that provide you with easy access to material to read with a simple click.
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, you can read/listen on the go. When it comes to printed
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, is certainly a decline seen in sales in the
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 few years,
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, many people have the opinion that holding a newspaper in their hands is much better than reading it on a mobile/laptop screen.
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, in my family home, despite the availability of modern devices where you can easily access a
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 or
newspapers
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, there is a hardcopy
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newspapers
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 always on the coffee table available for any member of our family to read, I have proved it works effectively. When it comes to hardcopy books, our older generation
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 might prefer to go for a hardcopy
book
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 of reaching for any media device to read. New reading devices cannot replace the texture and smell of the pages of a
book
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 and
newspapers
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. Even though many new trends for reading are expected in the future, I believe that a printed
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/newspaper will not become a thing of the past.
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