Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
Homelessness is a well-discussed
topics
recently. By rising the number of houseless people, individuals have got concerned about it. Change the noun form
topic
This
essay will explain two major facts of that and some solutions.
Possibly, there would be imperative factors such
as population
in compare
with the past. More Replace the word
comparison
population
leads to more home
needed Fix the agreement mistake
homes
consequently
, the price of renting or buying become higher so most citizens cannot live in a house
and they become homeless. Example
can be seen Add an article
An example
The example
as
India. Due to Change preposition
in
high
Correct article usage
the high
population
and price of houses
most Indians are living below the poverty level and Add a comma
,houses
be
Wrong verb form
being
vagrant
. The other cause would be Fix the agreement mistake
vagrants
addiction
, the most average Add an article
an addiction
of
homeless people are Change preposition
apply
drug-addicts
. If they were addicted they would leave their home, family, career and every essential needed in their life. Correct your spelling
drug addicts
Consequently
, they cannot achieve those needed especially their
Change preposition
in their
house
. For
example
in Add a comma
,example
Afghanistan
the Add a comma
,Afghanistan
addicts
ranges are Change to a genitive case
addict's
addicts'
same
as houseless citizens so it shows that would be impossible for addicts to have a Correct article usage
the same
house
.
However
, solutions of
homelessness are really changeable in different regions but there are some Change preposition
to
commons
. Replace the word
commonalities
For example
for amount of population
authorities should determine elements and control the
immigration, Correct article usage
apply
finally
citizens would find a suitable apartment or Add a comma
,finally
house
with low prices. On the other hand
, the government can determine suitable places or buildings for addicts or people who living below the poverty level and have job offers for them to achieve their needed at all
.
In conclusion, in my view, homelessness is an imperative problem worldwide and the government or authorities would control that with superb solutions.Correct determiner usage
apply
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