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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

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It is believed by someone that studying other different
languages
 is only good for working in other countries while others are of the belief that studying other
languages
also
 has more reasons. From my perspective, it is good for not only working but
also
 travelling and their favourite habit. It is understandable why some workers advocate learning different
languages
 is only used for working in a country which is not their country. The
first
 reason is that learning another accent is a crucial skill which help worker can seek a high salary job.
Moreover
, the manager tends to give the more important task to people who can communicate fluently with the origin company language.
However
, I believe that understanding more about other
languages
 will be more beneficial for learners.
Besides
 that, in today's society, there are various purposes that communities want to learn other kinds of wording. One of the reasons is that more and more people adore understanding the information about other regions by travelling or reading.
For instance
, communities tend to get the cultural background of other regions through a search for the international documents in English
such
 as traditional food, weather condition, and the character of populations. Another reason is that, in these days and age, a lot of companies which are foreign nations invest in Vietnam.
Therefore
, the demand for employees who know their accent with high income increased.
As a result
, more and more English centres have appeared in most the places in the nations because the number of populations who want to learn another wording experienced a dramatic rise.
This
 means that a lot of famous companies were present in Vietnam
such
 as Nikko, Coca-cola, and Ford.  In conclusion, while some personalities say that studying a different accent is only for working in a foreign area, I wholeheartedly believe that learning other
languages
 not only works in their country but
also
 travelling to many amazing places in the world and pursuing higher education.
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