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Public general have differing views with regard to the advent of concessionary aviation. Some people thinks it has provided a myriad of advantages by making overseas air travel more easily reachable whereas the opposite attitude is true for others. In this essay, I will discuss both views in detail and offer my opinion.

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The general public has differing views with regard to the advent of concessionary aviation. Some people think it has provided a myriad of advantages by making overseas
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travel
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 more easily reachable whereas the opposite attitude is true for others. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss both views in detail and offer my opinion. On the one hand, cheap
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 tickets benefit the community in various ways.
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, low-cost flights allow the population to
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 abroad easily.
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, from the economic perspective, the development of the aviation industry can be extremely positive since it facilitates trading activities between countries whereby economic growth can be improved.
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, thanks to accessible flights, people can
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 at a significantly lower price than before.
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, in the past, only wealthy individuals were able to
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 to other countries on holiday. Today as
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 tickets are more affordable, many human beings can enjoy a holiday in other countries.
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 implies the living standard has increased considerably.
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, the argument given above can be considered from the opposite angle as cheap
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travel
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 is believed to have associated detrimental environmental costs. In fact, not only do the aeroplanes use non-renewable resources, which have been running out, like fuel to work but they
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 pollute the
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 by emitting carbon dioxide. Needless to say, a person's health will be affected.
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, the aeroplane makes a great deal of noise which may result in many health issues.
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, residents living in the vicinity of the airport have to suffer from noise pollution all the time so they are likely to deal with deafness or headaches. In conclusion, I think the downsides of cheap
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 far outweigh the benefits as it impacts directly on people's surroundings and health.
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, it is high time the officials took it into consideration so that the crowd can take complete advantage of
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 convenient way of
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.
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