In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles would be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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the blessings of science,technology has been advancing rapidly and the automation projects for all kinds of transportation in future will be
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significant addition
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the automated sector.
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new changes have both merits and demerits,I believe
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car
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will make our life easier and
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.
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operated vehicles
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so many beneficial sides.The most important
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is it will lessen
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on busy roads
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on highways.
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, road accidents which
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a major concern nowadays
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will be reduced.
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,Driverless wagons will ensure safety especially
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moving roads at night.Overall,Automated transport facilities will make movements faster,reliable and cost-effective.
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namely Bangladesh,
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and India
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where alarming issues like huge traffic
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,accident rates and
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safety especially rape cases are higher,
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the automatic
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vehicle
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will be
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of the safest
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of transportation.
On the contrary
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some drawbacks too.Job
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or even unemployment in
this
automobile sector will be the most challenging
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in future.
Furthermore
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system
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systems
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like Artificial Intelligence (AI) may sometimes fail as only limited map routes will be saved in memory.
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,if somehow
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network gets hacked and misused by
one
group,human life will be at risk.
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,full dependency on mechanisms will not be advantageous
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time
,it needs human involvement too for smooth operations. To conclude,despite some negative impacts of driving without manpower,it is true that at present in
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busy and modern world change is inevitable in every
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sector
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and transportation
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one
of them which will foster huge development in
this
sector upcoming ways by the automotive motion.
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  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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