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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead? Write at least 250 words.

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While
people
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 migrating from one place to another is common nowadays, it has impacted the world in a big way. Overseas job opportunities and access to a better living standard are the most common reasons behind
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. It can cause significant damage to the source
country
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's economy as most of the nation's talent goes out of the
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. The foremost reason for folks to shift to another
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 is because of good work opportunities. Most
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 migrate to advance economies where there is good demand for skilled
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 and they get decent returns for their skillset.
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, many Indians moved to the USA in the late 1990s to work in the internet industry as there was a boom in internet jobs around that time. Another reason for
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 to consider moving to a foreign nation is the hope to achieve a better living standard.
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, many developed nations
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 as the USA, Australia, and New Zealand provide good overall facilities in terms of healthcare, education, and infrastructure, which ensures a decent lifestyle for their residents, and
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, attracts
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 to migrate. The rising trend of immigration can lead to several problems for both the source and destination countries. With talented crowd regularly moving out, a source
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's economic growth slows down as there are fewer good
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 left to earn. To give an example, many nations
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 as India, Nepal, and China have faced
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 issue when their most qualified citizens moved to America in search of a better life.
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, a high influx of immigrants can put pressure on the resources of the destination
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 and they have to face problems of inflation, hyper-competition etc. in the long run.
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, an increasing number of migrants can cause big problems for the world. To conclude, more and more individuals are choosing to migrate to a new
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 to get high paying jobs and enjoy a considerable better standard of life. Though beneficial for the immigrants, it can cause major issues for the economies involved.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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