Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the contemporary era,

sports

is

one

of the most viewed entertainment channels around the globe. Most people believe that dangerous

sports

should be banned, while others believe that it's

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a particular individual to choose. I feel choosing a

sport

should be a decision that should be left to athletes and let us discuss the future in the following essay.

Sports

are

one

of a kind

that is

played and watched by millions of people. While playing a

sport

can make us feel rejuvenated and keep our senses sharp

but

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It can

also

lead to

life threatening

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incidents. For ,instance in a recent survey in New Zealand, Rugby is considered to be

one

of their

most

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favourite

sport

as well dangerous

one

as well. In recent years the number of damage an individual has taken while guarding and tackling has increased and

also

at times

such

incidents have put those players in worse health conditions as well.

Nevertheless

, every

sport

has its pro and cons. Government and

sports

association

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should keep a close look on these dangerous hazards that are likely to happen and with proper planning and assigning trained medics and proper use of technology the impact can be reduced.

For example

: Wearing advanced technology helmets and receiving proper medical assistance

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the ground can lead to a better way.

Although

these factors are very much common in any

sport

and people playing these

sports

have experience and input about all the dangerous things and we have to leave these

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decisions on to the individual player to choose to play or quit playing the

sport

. To conclude, I believe

sport

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will always be remembered

for

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as better entertainers and

also

strongly support stating,

sports

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players have the right to choose and make decisions by themselves but as a viewer or admirer

to

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the game we should support and bring up new ideas and technology

such

that, danger to

this

player is brought down