Some people believe that violence in the media, such as in television programs and films, directly results in violent behaviour. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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media

are becoming very popular.

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, almost every

films

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and television

programs

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are having violent scenes which

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some

people

believe that it can influent the viewer to

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violence

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behavior

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.

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my perspective, I partly agree with

this

statement which I will depict the reasons in the below paragraphs.

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of all,

people

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violent film or programs will have a chance to commit

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crime in real life

such

as

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shooting incidents in America. They believe that

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are

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normal and get used to it.

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, some

people

can’t think that it is

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bad habit that shouldn’t be followed.

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, the

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games or

violence

in the

media

will contribute

people

to get angry easily. When they watch a lot of violent

film

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films

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, their brains will become work harder and cause

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negative

behaviors

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such

as

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a

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bad words and

more

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impatient.

Nevertheless

, the researchers found that the risk of having

a mental health problems

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mental health problems

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increasing since

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violent

media

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appear.

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flighting

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game that

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dangerous weapons to kill enemies. The game will influence kids to have

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bad habits, actions and

mind

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. In summary, the

violence

in the

media

can lead

people

to make a crime and cause their

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mental

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metal

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health which can

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both

of

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themself and society. In my perspective, I believe that if the

media

have less

violence

, it will bring

people

to have less flighting too.

Then

, the country will be safer and better.