Some people think computers are more important in education. Others believe that teachers play a more important role. Discuss both views.

Learning with technology has several
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for
people
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Firstly
, they could study whenever and wherever they want. Nowadays, most electronic devices are designed to be miniaturized and suitable for carrying around. Just need a phone connected to the Internet,
people
could access and learn without going to class.
Therefore
, they could save more time for other things.
Secondly
,
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technology
would
makes
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lessons more interesting. Information is aggregated and filtered before being presented.
As a result
, students are interested in learning, reducing the dropout rate. Face-to-face learning with
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teacher
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has several positive for students.
Firstly
, they could reduce distraction. When learning
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online class,
people
would lose focus because of notifications on the device,
such
as a message from friends, their’s plants need to be harvested
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, and so on.
Therefore
, studying with a teacher could
helps
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them improve their knowledge without being distracted.
Secondly
,
people
could get
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from
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teacher
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about their learning.
As a result
, they could design
the
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study program that
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their abilities. While it is true that technology could help
people
learn anytime they want, I believe that it brings some drawbacks for them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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