The system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to local council. In your letter: o Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly o Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors o Suggest what should be done about the problem.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to raise my concern regarding the rubbish collection

system

of our ward.

To begin

with,

although

the rubbish chute itself is fine,

the

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cleaning

system

of it is not working properly. As far as I know, it may need to enhance the whole

system

because

that

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existing

system

is

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already expired a few months ago.

This

incident

had

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happened

last

week and it has been affecting severely to me and our neighbors. The odd smell

are

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always coming out when we open the

trush

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trash

chute door and we can even see insects and flies around there as an implication. We would appreciate it if you could upgrade the whole water sprinkler

system

of it. Else, the hygiene of our neighbourhood will be disastrously declined. I was wondering if you could send your maintenance team as fast as possible to avoid these

situation

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becoming any worse. I trust you will give

this

matter your immediate attention. Yours faithfully, Tun Naung Win