Some people believe that children have the freedom to make mistakes, while others argue that adults should prevent them from doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the world, nobody can escape from doing

mistakes

.

However

, some people say that children can make

mistakes

freely while others dispute that adults are

also

restricted from doing

mistakes

. In

this

essay, I will elucidate both views and why I stand on my own points. There are some positive benefits of learning from

mistakes

in childhood but it should have some guidance.

For example

, the child is learning how to write the alphabet

however

, there is no doubt that the handwriting of the child won't be improved without someone's correction.

In addition

to that, the children practice mathematics to calculate the numbers,

initially

, they may not know the right calculation but they learn from their previous

mistakes

finally

they will get the right answers. In these cases, their parents and teachers are guiding them from behind. On the other side, the

mistakes

are still supporting adulthood.

This

means that there is no mistake the youth won't be improved in their skills.

For instance

, in the sports, the youth tries to pass the pole in the high jump,

initially

, he might be failed any time whereas one day he can become the gold medallist in the high jump while there is one person who keeps on telling his weaknesses and badness all the times beside him is his coach.

Furthermore

, the adult who prefers to get a higher position in the company should start to learn from basic stages from his colleagues or seniors, there will be a lot of

mistakes

but should not be disappointed. As a consequence, knowing advance from

mistakes

gets success. To sum up,

although

we have many misbehaviours that are beneficial results not only for the adolescents but

also

for the young generations to get success. Personally, I agree that

mistakes

for every age can transform to get achievements under the right controls if not that can become worse. So people should understand how to convert well from the bad.