Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Unarguably,
advertisement
turned into a powerful key in promoting and increasing
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sales rates around the globe. Some
people
like myself think nowadays, many are shopping for unnecessary
products
influenced by extreme promotions and
advertisements
around them,
this
practice could create a wasteful cycle for buyers and a profitable market for advertisers.
firstly
, in
this
recent era mass consumption by
people
is one of
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issues for our environment. in most cases
products
that are
encaourged
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encouraged
to be bought are ending in garbage trash after the
first
use. These unused goods may damage our environment by polluting our land and air, as some of those goods have
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chemical incidents which are harmful to our
surrounding
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.
Additionally
, these
advertisements
are designed to expending the company's profit;
therefore
, as much as more
people
tend to get tricked by these
advertisements
promoting companies will be encouraged to advertise more and more.
This
would change the ethical method of competition between the companies and will lead them to spend more attention on their
advertisements
than on the quality of their
products
.
secondly
, getting tricked by
this
sort of
advertisements
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have some negative financial drawbacks for shoppers.
For example
, many advertisers aim
a
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special range of age
such
as minors who could not detect the real purpose of
this
advertisement
and they will tend to spend their money on the
products
which they do not need it.
Also
, in many ,cases
this
advertisement
will lead individuals to mental difficulties
such
as regret and depression. Most
of
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the
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people
may not
able
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that
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products
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advertised;
therefore
, the pressure of
this
can lead the to depression or they may suffer from regrets after their purchase. All in all, perhaps
advertisement
leads
people
to shop for redundant goods. I am convinced that
this
method is not acceptable.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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