In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

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issue. The major factor behind why unethical activities are rising is

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poverty. In several

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and poor countries,

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unemployment and illiteracy

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the root cause of

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poverty.

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, some

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started to involve in robberies,

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money from other

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, in

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, a recent survey has shown that 70%

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of criminals

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sentenced to jail are

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who used to work at companies but now they indulged in crimes because of unemployment. Dealing with

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issue has become very necessary owing to its harmful

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society. The

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solution

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job opportunities.

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, governments should pay special attention to

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jobs so that

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do not get

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criminal activities.

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, offensive crimes can

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be reduced by implementing

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, Thailand has become able to reduce the crime rate by 11% in six

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imposing revised strict laws. To conclude,

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should deal the public issues

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as rising poverty and unemployment by forming strict

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and creating jobs so that

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avoid crime to

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their needs.