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A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Sara, Hope you and your family are doing well. I felt very happy to receive your letter yesterday. I realised that you will have gone on a camping holiday for the
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 time
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 summer. Have you chosen a place yet? I will recommend Morgon waterfall which is located in the Tia province. It is around a five-hour car journey from your house. To me, It is
breathtaking
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 beautiful. You can enjoy plenty of towering lush trees and divergent flowers along the way. It is stunning scenery.
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, there are a lot of water activities that are appealed to you.
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, boating, whitewater rafting and stuff like that. As it is surrounded by a fantastic mountain, people could go climbing the mountain and come down from the waterfall. It is a kind of bungee jumping. It is really thrilling for those who are looking for exciting adventures.
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, you should care about the weather.
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 you are supposed to be there during summer, it is very cool at night. You must take some warm clothes. Having a sleeping bag is the best choice.
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, along the way, there is a narrow mountain road. If it is rainy, driving will be tough in
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 a condition. I will suggest you check the weather before going there. I would very delighted if I am allowed to accompany you. To be honest, The
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 vacation we had been together not only was it
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 moment but
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 it was a worthy experience for me. I would be very lucky if I had a chance to join you. Hope you enjoy your camping trip. Best Wishes, Vivian
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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