A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Sara, Hope you and your family are doing well. I felt very happy to receive your letter yesterday. I realised that you will have gone on a camping holiday for the

first

time

this

summer. Have you chosen a place yet? I will recommend Morgon waterfall which is located in the Tia province. It is around a five-hour car journey from your house. To me, It is

breathtaking

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breathtakingly

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beautiful. You can enjoy plenty of towering lush trees and divergent flowers along the way. It is stunning scenery.

Moreover

, there are a lot of water activities that are appealed to you.

For instance

, boating, whitewater rafting and stuff like that. As it is surrounded by a fantastic mountain, people could go climbing the mountain and come down from the waterfall. It is a kind of bungee jumping. It is really thrilling for those who are looking for exciting adventures.

However

, you should care about the weather.

Although

you are supposed to be there during summer, it is very cool at night. You must take some warm clothes. Having a sleeping bag is the best choice.

In addition

, along the way, there is a narrow mountain road. If it is rainy, driving will be tough in

such

a condition. I will suggest you check the weather before going there. I would very delighted if I am allowed to accompany you. To be honest, The

last

vacation we had been together not only was it

memorable

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moment but

also

it was a worthy experience for me. I would be very lucky if I had a chance to join you. Hope you enjoy your camping trip. Best Wishes, Vivian

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7 paragraphs

276 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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