Nowadays, children play less with others and this has an impart on their development. What are the reasons for this? Does it have a good or a bad effect on children?

Today, the majority of the
children
are not really interested in playing or spending time with their family members
as well as
friends
due to
miscellaneous reasons, which I think will affect their development both positively and negatively depending on the circumstances. First of all, technology has been growing rapidly which is one of the main reasons and impacts on
children
's interaction with
others
.
For instance
, my brother Gantsooj who is only 8 years old
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always spends his free time playing computer games on his desktop.
Although
it seems no big deal, it really drives his attention and causes addiction in him. In fact, he
also
spends hours on TV.
As a result
, he does not have many friends
as well as
does not interact with people that often which sometimes bothers me so much.
In addition
, even though technology has dozens of benefactions, it
also
affects the growth of
children
's brains
such
as loss of memory, lack of ability to comprehend and understand,etc.
Secondly
, the increased number of crime
crisis
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. Nowadays, there are myriad
of
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crimes which occur almost every single day and because of that parents do not really allow their
children
to spend time with
others
especially if
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do not know the person well or if the individual does not look safe.
For example
, my best friend Anna has two boys, one is 6 years old and the other one is 4 years old. She always teaches her
children
to stay away from
others
regardless of their ages because of the horrifying incidents which happened previously in the social world.
Therefore
, she prefers her kids to play in the house or with different
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of toys
instead
. In conclusion, from my perspective, there are numerous reasons
when
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children
play with
others
less which sometimes impacts negatively
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their health but
also
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when it comes to their
safeties
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social skills
  • physical activity
  • communication
  • interaction
  • bonding
  • emotional development
  • cognitive development
  • creativity
  • imagination
  • screen time
  • peer pressure
  • overprotective
  • outdoor spaces
  • play areas
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • socialization
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