Nowadays, children play less with others and this has an impart on their development. What are the reasons for this? Does it have a good or a bad effect on children?
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children
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miscellaneous reasons, which I think will affect their development both positively and negatively depending on the circumstances.
First of all, technology has been growing rapidly which is one of the main reasons and impacts on Linking Words
children
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For instance
, my brother Gantsooj who is only 8 years old Linking Words
and
always spends his free time playing computer games on his desktop. Correct word choice
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Although
it seems no big deal, it really drives his attention and causes addiction in him. In fact, he Linking Words
also
spends hours on TV. Linking Words
As a result
, he does not have many friends Linking Words
as well as
does not interact with people that often which sometimes bothers me so much. Linking Words
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also
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children
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such
as loss of memory, lack of ability to comprehend and understand,etc.
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Secondly
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crisis
. Nowadays, there are myriad Fix the agreement mistake
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of
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children
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do not know the person well or if the individual does not look safe. Correct pronoun usage
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For example
, my best friend Anna has two boys, one is 6 years old and the other one is 4 years old. She always teaches her Linking Words
children
to stay away from Use synonyms
others
regardless of their ages because of the horrifying incidents which happened previously in the social world. Use synonyms
Therefore
, she prefers her kids to play in the house or with different Linking Words
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In conclusion, from my perspective, there are numerous reasons Linking Words
when
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children
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