Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

People
often argue that it is better to have
friends
with
same
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beliefs while other
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that we should have companions with different thinking. I agree with the point that it is better to have
friends
with
different
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mentality. In
this
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I would discuss both
the
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views.
To begin
with, everyone needs a friend or
friends
in
life
, to
have
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enjoy and support. Some
people
choose
friends
who have
same
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ideas and thought
process
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. It creates a monotonous and boring
life
. They always discuss
about
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same things that
leads
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to Inactivtiaon of their brains and make it dull. To move forward,
people
who have
friends
with different judgement leads to
have
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better
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a better
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life
. Sometimes they
are not agree
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on some points which push an individual to do something better. It triggers their thinking. They help each other to come out of problems through different solutions.
Moreover
, a different personality aids different taste in
life
and make
life
interesting as well as enjoyable. In the end, it can be said that
people
who have different
friends
have
good
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life
and have better suggestions
to
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their problems
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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