Some people claim that too much focus and resources have been spent to protect wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous

spieces

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species

pieces

across the globe are disappearing due to environmental changes. Environment activists

particpate

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participate

in

debate

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debates

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to express

importance

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the importance

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of

animals

and birds to some individuals,

also

they

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apply

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explore opportunities to

rise

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raise

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funds and volunteers to save the earth. I agreed that it is very important to take care of wild

animals

and birds and save these

spieces

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species

for future generations. In the below paragraphs, I describe the importance of these

animals

and

thier

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their

role in

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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.

To begin

with, due to various reasons wild

animals

and birds are being killed by human beings in direct or indirect ways. Every animal

play

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an important role to keep our globe safe.

For instance

, the number of sparrows

are

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is

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drastically reduced in the

last

decade,

this

is because of radiations emitted by cell phone signals. Sparrows

helps

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the farmers and forests, they eat insects and carry seeds from one place to

other

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another

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location,

As a result

, farmers will get better yield and forests extend their radius.

In addition

, To save these

animals

policymakers must need a budget and resources to work with environmental activists to save the

spieces

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species

. These

animals

require proper caring which comes only with a lot of cost and

individuals

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time.

For instance

,

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Government

Goverment

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the Goverment

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of India has spent

billopn

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billions

billion

of

ruppes

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rupees

to save tigers

to

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for

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the

next

generations, they tagged every tiger with

geo tracking

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and allocated employees to monitor them every

second

.

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,

with

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apply

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in the

last

5

years

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the sum of tigers in India is almost doubled.

Therefore

, cost and worker allocation is a key to

save

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saving

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wild

animals

to

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for

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our children. In summary, Human beings are selfish and destroying

the

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apply

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mother nature. The government and activists must work together to

rise

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raise

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funds and resources to save the

animals

for upcoming kids which will save the earth and mankind.