Whoever controls the media also controls the opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In the technological era, even a small
information
is quickly available on various sources of media
. Most of
the Change preposition
apply
peoples
conceptions and views are modified after viewing the reviews of Change to a genitive case
people's
peoples'
people
in the forums. I believe that constant bombarding the controlled flow of information
on multimedia really affects the opinions of people
.
Every Media
present needs an income on which it can sustain and provide service. so advertising is one of the source
of income for the Change to a plural noun
sources
media
. It always shows the ads which are generating more revenue and try
to give more view time slots, which end up Correct subject-verb agreement
tries
people
believe and increase in sales though these products may not be a
good for society. Change the article
apply
Majority
of these ads Correct article usage
The majority
shows
half or false Change the verb form
show
information
. For example
, promoting junk foods is not good for society and it is
just Unnecessary verb
apply
increase
the health risk in the country Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
and
Correct word choice
apply
such
kind of promotion should have been avoided.
Furthermore
, the media
owners do not publish the news that is
against the wealthy or organisational institutes which may affect the society in a negative way. For example
, discuss
only the positives of any Wrong verb form
discussing
govermental
Correct your spelling
governmental
schemes
and not discussing the negative ways and challenges Fix the agreement mistake
scheme
in
those schemes will build a wrong perception among the users. Change preposition
of
Additionally
, people
will not find any more detailed reviews or discussion
in forums that would say negative about the scheme which Fix the agreement mistake
discussions
wil
Correct your spelling
will
further
Correct your spelling
furthermore
more
manipulate an individual to believe the news floating around Correct quantifier usage
apply
for
the scheme.
To conclude, in my opinion, With various social Change preposition
about
media
, public forums, paid
Correct word choice
and paid
media
all are established for financial gains so the majority of the information
that floats around across this
various channels is either controlled or biased and the half Correct determiner usage
these
information
moving convinces the people
to believe in those news
which cannot be Change the determiner
that news
rectify
until Change the form of the verb
rectified
majority
of Add an article
the majority
a majority
people
face the issue and take a stand against it.Submitted by BHAVESH.PANCHAL55 on
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