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Some people feel that water scarcity can lead to international strife. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Water
 insecurity is increasing worldwide daily. Many people think that it raises
th
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the
 chance of competition and I agree that
this
 is a serious problem and that it could lead to
an
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international
conflicts
.
water related
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conflicts
 are increasingly making headlines: disputes over
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major
 dam projects in Central Asia and the Nile river, violence in Lake Chad and so on. These examples clearly show some of the many ways
conflicts
 arise around
water
 the reasons for
these enmity
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 between countries is the lack of
water
, and the reasons for the shortage of drinking
water
 are related to the effects of climate change, human activities leading to a reduction in
water
 resources due to pollution of
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fresh
waterwater
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water water
 ecosystems, as well as the consequences of urbanization.
This
 pollution is facilitated by industrial
immisions
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emissions
immissions
 and runoff, the washing of plant food from fields as well as the ingress of
salt
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saltwater
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water
 in seafront zones due to pumping of
ground
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water
.
Therefore
, people, realising
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 importance of
this
 problem as well as the significance of drinking
water
 arrange wars among themselves which lend
into
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 international
conflicts
.
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example
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 of
thsi
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this
 is the tense situation between
Uzbekistand
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Uzbekistan
 and Kazakhstan due to lack of
water
, namely to the unfair division of the Syrdarya River.
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