Write a letter to your boss apologising for the recent meeting you missed at work. Apologise for missing the meeting. Explain what happened. Say what you will do to compensate.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to raise my
apologise
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for the incident that
happended
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happened
yesterday. It is really miserable to say that I could not manage to make attendance of the meeting due to my
sister
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severe fever. I know that you will be angry and
disappoint
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at
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me as it was
an
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desperately urgent for our company.
Although
I understand that it is insufficient to justify
like
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that,
but
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I had no choice to do
this
because there was nobody at that time and I needed to bring my sister to the hospital. Even though I was hoping to leave her
at
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there, the doctor required a family member to
be
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stand by if they needed permission in any urgency.
However
, I will be checking back the meeting records and
get
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required
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information through my colleagues if it was needed. I hope
if
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you could understand my inevitable circumstances. I will be available to
meeting
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you from now
if
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you got anything to discuss with me. Yours faithfully, Tun Naung Win
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