Write a letter to your boss apologising for the recent meeting you missed at work. Apologise for missing the meeting. Explain what happened. Say what you will do to compensate.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to raise my

apologise

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for the incident that

happended

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happened

yesterday. It is really miserable to say that I could not manage to make attendance of the meeting due to my

sister

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sister's

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severe fever. I know that you will be angry and

disappoint

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disappointed

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me as it was

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desperately urgent for our company.

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I understand that it is insufficient to justify

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that,

but

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I had no choice to do

this

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because there was nobody at that time and I needed to bring my sister to the hospital. Even though I was hoping to leave her

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there, the doctor required a family member to

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stand by if they needed permission in any urgency.

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, I will be checking back the meeting records and

get

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required

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information through my colleagues if it was needed. I hope

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you could understand my inevitable circumstances. I will be available to

meeting

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you from now

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you got anything to discuss with me. Yours faithfully, Tun Naung Win

tunnaungwin11Wed May 18 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

174 words

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Write a letter to your boss apologising for the recent meeting you missed at work. Apologise for missing the meeting. Explain what happened. Say what you will do to compensate.

Some people say that school education is not useful and the essence of study can be acquired at home. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

Topic: Some people think that the spread of multinational companies and globalization produces positive outcomes for everyone. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Some people believe that technology has led to many positive developments in their lives, while others think technology is gradually taking over control of the way people live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people spend a lot of money on hosting birthday parties, family functions, and other celebrations. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In some countries, as cities grow, more money is spent on the urban transport system and little is spent on the rural ones. What are the problems creating it? What are the solutions to these problems?