some people think that it would be better for large companies to move to regional areas outside large urban centres. Do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

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companies

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a vital role in

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the nations

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Gross Domestic Product (GDP). Many individuals think big firms should be relocated to outskirts of the city premises. In my

opnion

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opinion

, merits

outweighs

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the demerits. A common

critisization

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civilization

is most employees in large firms as based in downtown

areas

and they will have to commute all the way to the outskirts.

Other

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problem is

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If it is a manufacturing company, majority of their

finsihed

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finished

goods should be transported to the downtown where they can distribute it to their vendors and cost of transportation will

be rise

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up.

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to it, constant watch on these firms will be

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difficult

diffucult

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task

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for authorities as they will not have the right facilities to

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. Despite the

pessimist

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mentioned

in

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above, the main

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constructive

merits

is

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firstly

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, it provides better work opportunities to the locals.

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managments

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management

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prospective

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the cost of

maintance

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maintenance

for

such

large

companies

in

particular

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sector will reduce and can generate good profits.

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,

cost

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of living in these remote

areas

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on

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a

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cheaper which will attract employees to think about it. And

further more

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to

this

we always see that

companies

located in city

center

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always draws a huge amount of

pople

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people

which

geniunely

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genuinely

causes heavy traffic if

companies

are established in remote

areas

then

this

traffic can be cut by half in numbers. To conclude,

companies

established in rural

areas

have much better advantages

although

there are

drawback

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but

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I

donot

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do not

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think these drawbacks

outweights

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outweighs

outweigh

the merits.