Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

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evaluations are the main feature of the academic system in various countries. Even though
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give to
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better comprehension of the studied subject and ,
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, an enhanced commitment during lectures, I believe that
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cannot cover every inch of the
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curriculum and more importantly,
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do not evaluate all
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students
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true abilities. Examinations have always been the preferred tool to evaluate
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students’
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academic skills and,
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, to keep
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focus during lectures in order to not fail the aforementioned
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.
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, the future job career of a graduate student is indissolubly linked to
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academic career, especially the received grades in specific subjects.
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, a student will focus on these lectures and, eventually receive high grades in those relevant subjects.
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will lead the student in having the chance to choose the wanted job career.
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, I believe that
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cannot cover every module of the
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courses and that
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do not evaluate
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’ skills properly;
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, I argue that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. Many
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know that
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exams
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cover specific parts of the course and what the teacher
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is relevant to know in order to pass.
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, because of
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study hard just bits of the modules for the sake of the grade itself than for the sake of showing their abilities.
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results
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not evaluating the
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’ real skills but simply mnemonic study. In conclusion, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages of the
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systems’ main tool. I believe that
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will show their true abilities if the
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system
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non-grade quizzes
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of official
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