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Many people that media coverage has becoming increasingly biased today. Why is this? What can be done to fix this problem.

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It is generally accepted that some media illustrate wrong notions with rapid increase. In
this
 essay, I will explore the causes of the news coverage and put forward some feasible solutions. One of the major causes is that people’s living rhythm has been promoted immensely with the upgrading of neo-knowledge and hi-tech which the information renders them. The acceleration of industrialization and the prosperity of the economy benefit our society a great deal.
For instance
, internet social networks and communication have become very populous in people’s life.
However
 , some report is losing their fitness.
That is
, some management, TV schedule and
such
 things are advertising useless things. Not only that, manipulation wants to earn more money with advertisements
instead
 of
this
 Chanel development and they give worthless information to people with a different plan and long-running soap operas. Another factor comes from the biased of own television companies. What I mean by
this
, personal Chanel advertises they opt and they do not interest in people’s demands.
This
 privacy policy not only adversely affects adults but
also
 children. Children want to watch cartoons and adults have a craving for news about world situations on TV. But their demands and desires are not satisfied. If handling and media relieve the effect. I think the following suggestions are feasible and practical .
Firstly
, the government control its own news, and politician renders the quality TV schedule. Not only that, but the government should ban curriculum and media that affect some people and those that are not covered. To infer, earning more money should not be obtained at the price of the deterioration of communication quality.
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