Many people believe that every individual is responsible for his/ her own healthy lifestyle others believe that governments should take care of it. Discuss both views and give opinion

A lot of

people

think that every

citizens

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is responsible for his/her own

healthy

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for

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and for

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improving

well-being

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of his/her lifestyle but others believe that

governments

should protect all

people

's

health

. I partly agree with

this

statement, that

governments

can be taken some measures

such

as every

people

go to a

sport

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centre every week.

On the other hand

, everybody can make various sports with

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their own

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decision

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. Both of these viewpoints will be outlined in detail before concluding.76

To begin

with, the damage caused by healthy varies considerably depending on both the human

health

and body and mental activities. Recent research suggests that focusing on his or her body can be beneficial for

human's

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health

. Many

people

want to be impacted by politicians to develop their body

health

but every individual should

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themselves.57

On the other hand

, it wouldn't be harmful if

governments

do something for human

health

. They should attention

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and import products which they buy,

espacially

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especially

their own productions.

For instance

, when I was a child, I bought tomatoes in

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and I got poisoned after

eating

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.

Therefore

, It impacted my

health

negatively.

Then

I tried to get better in a hospital.

This

and similar situations can be

orginized

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organized

by

governments

.

In addition

, every citizen can be

engouraged

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encouraged

the sports after

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their work as long as giving some money.

Thus

, they contribute to our

health

.96 To sum up, considering the solution , if it is globally,

governments

may apply many different solutions to protect our

health

. And at the same time,

people

who want to have

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good

health

can do many various sports.