Although many people value public parks, this space could be better used for the other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and build economics. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Public

parks

are an attraction

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many

people

of different ages to visit,

however

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there are others who deem that

such

space should be better used to build

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areas for the rising number of locals or companies to develop the economy of the city. In my view, the presence of

aminities

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amenities

like

parks

is essential since it

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only a space where

people

can spend their leisure time but

also

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conservation of many ecosystems. Despite its undeniable worth, some

people

still hold that sheltering the growing

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population as well as developing the local economy by constructing new accommodations or new businesses should be

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favoured

over green spaces.

In other words

, individuals should have plenty of choices when it comes to finding a place to live

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and have the right to secure good jobs in their cities.

For example

, graduated students who just transited to adult life would prioritise getting

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work and a convenient settlement

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without

the need to travel away.

Therefore

, some

people

believe that these spaces could be better used for other purposes.

However

, most locals would

defenitly

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crave a place where they can have a quality time after a long day at work or

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break the routine. Overall, green spaces provide these

picturisc

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pictures

,

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scenic

scenery

scenario

, and relaxing views that the cities' residents need.

For instance

,

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free days families go out so they can

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fresh air and recharge after draining

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.

Moreover

,

parks

usually attract many species that will use it as a shelter from insects

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sich

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as butterflies to different types of birds,

also

the trees will absorb toxic gases and release oxygen into the air.

Consequently

, there are many good reasons why we should protect and value

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of facilities. In conclusion, while it is deemed that residential areas and business

buldings

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buildings

must replace the public

parks

, I disagree with the above

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statement

and argue that these public resorts are a breather for many ecosystems, namely humans, animals and plants.