Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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today

world

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many of us are under constant

stress

. A similar pattern has emerged for teenagers over the years.

Stress

young

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the young

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generation

is often related to

the

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apply

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academics, whilst the

previouse

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generations

had to face different causes of

stress

. On one hand, the academic world has become more competitive.

Teenager

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are under increasing academic pressure, as education is becoming more

competetive

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competitive

For instance

, entry requirements for universities are getting higher and higher.

Furthermore

, competition for a

limted

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limited

number of places is increasing in these institutions.

This

results in many teenagers having to work more and harder to achieve their goals of attending university.

On the other hand

, the type of

stress

teenagers experience

today

is different to what the previous

generations

have experienced. I do not believe that it is fair to say that

today

generation

has to deal with more

stress

Although

, it

appeares

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appears

appeared

that the nature of

stress

has changed. For

exmaple

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example

, my grandfather had to walk five

kilometers

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to school, no matter the conditions outside.

This

is something that many

teenager

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teenagers

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today

do not have to worry about.

In other words

, as our world has become more developed, many causes of

stress

that may have affected the previous

generations

are not as relevant

today

. In conclusion, it

appeares

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appears

fair to say that an increase in academic pressure, has resulted in an increase in

stress

for the young

generation

However

, I do not believe that

today

generation

is exposed to overall more

stress

comapred

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compared

to previous

generations

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