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Some people think planning future is a waste of time and people should focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that being concerned about upcoming moments of
life
 is totally useless, an individual ought to enjoy the current period of
life
. Admittedly, being in the current period of
time
 is a good
way
 to be delighted in
life
.
Nonetheless
, I believe that working out in the
future
 is always fruitful and even productive. On the one hand, some factors would help to understand the importance of enjoying presently.
First
 and foremost is that
people
 who only focus on their presentations are always happier than those who are concerned about the
future
. To elaborate,
people
 having
such
 kind of living attitude are always mentally healthy even they spend quality
time
 with their loved ones which
further
 leads to healthy relationships.
Moreover
, enjoying the day to day
life
 is considered the best
way
 of living since in that
way
 individuals can celebrate even the small events of their lives which helps to have a sound mind and body.
On the other hand
, ( it is fairly easy to understand why
future
 planning is important) there are some worthy factors making it more understandable how planning helps in
life
.
Firstly
, the masses who plan their
future
, are more concerned about their upcoming
life
. No doubt, they take more stress but the probability of their success is more than others who do not plan. To be precise,
people
 who consider planning as a waste of
time
, are proved to be wrong because planning is even helpful to save the upcoming
time
 in that
way
 an individual having
life
 planning takes less
time
 to deal( with unforeseen) any upcoming situation in
life
. To cite an example, planners, having medical insurance would not hesitate in tough/complicated/hard situations because they have invested their
time
 and money in the
future
.
Lastly
, it can be said that planning is fruitful in ongoing
life
 or even to succeed in
life
 ahead. To conclude,
although
 sans concerned about
future
people
 would live a stressless
life
, I believe that being futuristic is important for more possibility of the successor to be ready for upcoming challenges of
life
.
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