Alcohol plays an important part in the lives of many people. However, some problems are connected with alcohol use. In what ways can the use of alcohol be negative for an individual or a society? How can these problems be overcome?

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pinpoint possible ways of dealing with it. In essence,

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of awareness for

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drinker’s families, friends and communities.

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consumption may be damaged the internal parts of the body and

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other than the drinker, and can have negative consequences for

society

as a whole. It is commonly believed to play a role in decreased worker productivity Due to lack of concentration and

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aggression and violence against others, and child and spouse abuse. Despite these challenges, it is possible to resolve these paints through educational campaigns and government facilities. National campaigns,

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can be promoted

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information that people need

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more about what

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. Adolescents should teach in school about

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’s drawbacks. They shouldn’t use or moderate drinking sometimes.

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if the government provides more welfare and recreational facilities for

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and entertainment in their life not only will not be inclined to

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material to improve their morale but

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a moment enjoyable with terrible consequences. In conclusion,

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many people

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society

have been experiencing to use

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and creating

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of awareness and a moment of

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. I would advise

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consumption controlled or get rid of it. Experts in government and

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allocated more time and planned

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resolve

this

problem in the

society

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